Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Hi all,
In this post, I got one poem and one blank.
The poem is from an acquaintance, who dropped it into a group, where I am too a member.
The blank I wrote here was a reflex action, but after reading the poem/ blank you too can have something to say about matter touched here.
World at odds see world the way it likes, it is this attitude that make everyone associated with it unique. You can be our friends,our readers, the culprit or fans but you and we strike same chords.
Anyhow read the two creations and let me know, what your opinion is.


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ............ ......... .Really Beautiful Poem........ ......... .....

Here i am sitting in my office @ night…
Thinking hard about life
How it changed from a maverick college life to strict professional life…...

How tiny pocket money changed to huge monthly paychecks
but then why it gives lesss happiness….

How a few local denim jeans changed to new branded wardrobe
but then why there are less people to use them

How a single plate of samosa changed to a full Pizza or burger
But then why there is less hunger…..

Here i am sitting in my office @ night…
Thinking hard about life
How it changed…..

How a bike always in reserve changed to bike always on
but then why there are less places to go on……

How a small coffee shop changed to cafe coffee day
but then why its feels like shop is far away…..

How a limited prepaid card changed to postpaid package
but then why there are less calls more messages……

Here i am sitting in my office @ night…
Thinking hard about life
How it changed…..

How a general class journey changed to Flight journey
But then why there are less vacations for enjoyment….

How a old assembled desktop changed to new branded laptop
but then why there is less time to put it on……….

How a small bunch of friends changed to office mate
but then why after 8'o Clock it always feel like getting late….

Here i am sitting in my office @ night…
Thinking hard about life
How it changed….. how it changed…….. ,

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The realistic blank

One day, that will be next,
You will be sitting in a rocking chair,
Counting your age,
Then it will seem those office days were my best days.
You will again have the time of life,
No more sitting in office,
No more thinking hard abt life,
Will you be still complaining abt life?

I wonder why you still complaining abt life,

What you have den and what you have now,
Being growing is the thing of life,
No bike or having a merc, what difference it make,
If you do not know how to ride in wind, drive in storm,
Won’t you have a wife and kid, when you have new office life,
I would like you complain, if you do seems not to like,
These new found additions in life.

I had coffee and one day had wine,
With all my frenz in a conference online,
I know how to live a new life with office in mind,
Seem you too can follow something too in your life..

West.

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2 comments:

west said...

i do not why i did posted this post.....

but guys.......it was instantaneous....cant help it.....

u may have your own versions...relate it..

shivani said...

how touchy , how deep....... simply loved it

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